Year 3 and 4 Literacy

Mercury Class have been writing their own stories based on traditional tales.

 

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Goldicat

 

The bears go to the seaside

 

Little Red Riding Pig

 

 

 

Comet Class have made poster about their favourite authors work.

GOLDICAT

    AND THE THREE

          DOGS!!!

Chapter 1.

Once upon a time there were a family of dogs. They went for a walk across the beach. Then they thought their porridge would be cool. So they walked back home. When they got home there was a surprise waiting for them. All their porridge was eaten .The dogs ran into the living room to three broken chairs. The dogs carefully ran up stairs they went in to the bedroom to find a cat in one of the beds. Then the cat woke up.

Chapter2

The dogs welcomed her into their home. Then they fixed the chair.

Then had Breakfast. The breakfast was that delicious that the cat joined them. When goldicat had her breakfast she went back home to her family. When she was at home she told her mom and dad about that morning. They didn’t believe her because she always used to tell lies.

 

 

The bears go to the seaside

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

By Becky C and Lauren J

 

Chapter one: The bears run away

When Becky and Ben lived with their mother bears and father bear they were very happy together. But one Saturday when Becky and Ben were born their mother died of bear disease. So they had to live with their stepfather. Even though they lived in a hotel in the countryside. They did not like it. Then after some bread Becky said “I have an idea when our step bear is asleep we creep out and go to the beach. ” “That  is a  clever idea, ” said Ben...

 

 

 

So off they  went  to the beach
 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Chapter two: the ice – cream van  

 

When they finally got there they saw a big ice – cream van and wanted to eat some. But they couldn’t help it so they just went to eat some anyway. Then a person who was a very small dwarf said “come on in and I will give you an ice – cream” said the dwarf. “Look in the fridge to see if it is cold enough” said the dwarf “we are not tall enough” said the bears. “why don’t you look?” So he did and the bears pushed him in.

so that was the end of him!!!

 

So they decided to live on their own.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Little Red Riding Pig

 

 

By Sophie, Millie and Jennifer.
 

 


                           

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter One:Sick.
 


                                

 

 

 Once upon a time Little Red Riding Pig was bored, but then her mother called down and shouted “ Go to your sisters bungalow and give her this basket to her.”

On the way she was picking flowers for her sister, then the fox came out of his hole and scared her. All  the hairs on  the back of the pigs neck  stuck out.  She was so scared she started to run and banged into a tree. She swivelled around quickly and then suddenly started to explain everything.

 

Chapter two: Scream.

 

The fox ran off. Little Red Riding Pig called out “COME BACK!”. But he was already gone. When the fox got to her sisters bungalow, the fox jumped down the chimney. He went into the bedroom and was just going  to eat  Little Red Riding Pigs sister...............

 

 

Chapter Three :Toothache

Then her sister said cheerfully “Oh you must be the dentist to come and see my toothache.”

Before the fox could answer her sister opened her mouth and waited patiently. The fox looked down, he couldn’t see anything.

 

Chapter four: Brush.

Then Little Red Riding Pig knocked  on the door and came in. What she saw was very weird. Her sister  had a fox’s brush sticking out of her mouth.

 

 

 

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